Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We live in the era of modern times, but still,
the
traditional and religious Correct article usage
apply
festivals
play a very important role in our society . Some believe, during
festive seasons, Correct word choice
that during
people
only want to enjoy themselves. I firmly agree with this
opinion and in this
essay
I will provide certain Add a comma
essay,
argument's
to support my point. Nowadays, most Change noun form
arguments
people
have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals
. This
is as
Correct word choice
why
people
these days
prefer to enjoy themselves in their own way. There are many disadvantages that doing so can have. For instance
, traditional and religious festivals
are a part of a persons
family. They provide an individual with information and values about their rich culture and history. Change noun form
person's
Nevertheless
, instead
of understanding and learning about all this
, people
these days
prefer spending their time chatting or going out with their friends, rather than spending that time with their families. Also
, with time, the very definition of " enjoying " during festive seasons has changed. People
these days
think going to clubs, partying, having outside food, buying new clothes and so on is what defines " enjoying ". All this
will just add up
to the lack of knowledge that the latest generation has about the true meaning behind traditional and religious Change preposition
apply
festivals
. These are just a few of the many argument's
which go on to show how the real meaning of traditional and religious Change noun form
arguments
festivals
has faded away in today's generation. So in a nutshell, the importance and actual meaning behind traditional and religious festivals
has been forgotten by people
these days
, but instead
, they only want to enjoy themselves. Comments: Post a comment on "IELTS Recent Actual Test With Answers (Vol 2) Writing Practice Test 4" Name E-mail Address Type comment here... No comments yet. Share & get evaluation
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