Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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There is no doubt that the motivation to choose a type of

accomodation

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accommodation

is very particular and crucial for a person's well-being.

Although

some individuals believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks to living in a

house

, others decide to live in an

apartment

. I agree with the former statement and in

this

essay, I will explain why I believe that the benefits to (of) living in a

house

outweigh the drawbacks in comparison with living in an

apartment

Firstly

, the negative of living in a

house

compared to living in an

apartment

, (-)is that the former is less affordable than the latter. The reason for

this

is that a

house

has more

space

and area than an

apartment

, (-)so that the cost of living is more expensive. Even when deciding to buy one.

As a result

, some people choose to live in an

apartment

and have less (fewer) expenses. Whereas some who have more financial conditions (financial means or just means), choose to live in a

house

in order to have more comfort.

However

, the main advantage of living in a

house

is that It has more

space

and

privacy

This

is because when living in an

apartment

, we have a huge number of neighbours

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while living in a

house

we have fewer.

This

is a problem because, as we do not know the intention of everyone, when living in an

apartment

we are more exposed to gossip, as a consequence most of our

privacy

is taken.

On the other hand

, living in a

house

enables us to have less interference from others and more

privacy

thus

there is more

space

and green area around to (for) leisure and relaxation in comparison with an

apartment

This

is a great choice especially for a family with children. In conclusion, considering that choosing a place to live is very important, I strongly believe that the advantages of

privacy

space

and comfort that comes with living in a

house

outweigh the disadvantages of (the) price compared with living in an

apartment

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Topic Vocabulary:

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outdoor activities
gardening
customization options
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structural changes
investments
appreciation/depreciation
maintenance costs
utility costs
security features
gated entries
surveillance systems
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community centers
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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Fully explain your ideas

Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their work place at home, when traveling. Do the bed benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

Some people say Olympics games does not play a role in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree

Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.