You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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I am writing

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letter to report the malfunctioning of a

laptop

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which I purchased

last

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week from your shop.

Initially

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, when I bought

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laptop

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, it was correctly working. After an hour screen of the

laptop

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started showing some issues. I switched off and started again, still offering the same problem, which is affecting my daily work very poorly. Due to

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persistent problem, it has become difficult for me to work continuously. I have a deadline for my project, and if I could not complete it within a given period, it will affect my job as my boss already gave me a warning. The only solution for

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problem is to replace my

laptop

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with a new one, and I

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have a request to check twice before selling the products. Waiting for a prompt reply Yours faithfully, Sheemaanoob

sheema.anoobSun Nov 08 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

141 words

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The Greeting

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