Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to someone can hamper their inner capability and it is same for nations too.

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when it comes to overcoming natural calamities and saving lives it has great importance, after that the poor country must try to build their own

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strength. Rather developed countries can give

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which would really make the country rich by their own.

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education system, the talent could be supported to grow

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money to poorer countries. On the

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Topic Vocabulary:

poverty alleviation
economic inequality
developing nations
foreign aid
sustainable growth
technical assistance
expertise
infrastructure
education
fair trade
trade barriers
sustainable development
environmental conservation

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