Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time Others belive that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply Discuss both views and give your opinion

We are living in a world that

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orld population has been increasing at

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xponential rate.

Accordingly

,the need for buildings is growing day by day.

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, many

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that it is crucial to construct strong buildings whereas others argue that it is more important to build quickly and affordable places in

order

to meet high demands.I support the

first

idea and I will outline my point of view in

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essay. Strenght of buildings should be

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rimary concern for constructors.Because people need houses in

order

to provide a secure place

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themselves.The place should protect

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outdoor threats

such

as bad weather conditions or natural disasters.Especially, houses ought to be constructed by considering

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ossibility of these disasters like earthquake.When earthquakes hit,buildings have to endure without collapsing. Following

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another concern that we need to accelerate construction works in

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to meet

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ising demands of housing.

Besides

, these buildings should be affordable for everyone to prevent homelessness.In

order

to provide

this

, many safety regulations are dismissed by authorities.

However

, it has to be known that

this

attitude put people more danger than homelessness.To illustrate,when buildings collapse, many people probably lose their lives. To conclude,

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ack of accommodation is a serious issue for people.

However

, people’s safety should be considered at

first

when construction

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Instead

of building cheap houses without precautions, we need to focus on providing a safe shelter for people.