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Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it causes problems. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many people think that if older men are fitted to task after the age of 60, it gives many problems. According to
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I do believe that it could influence to effort.
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, older people are tired, and they can't job effectively as young ones.
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, 60 years old cant deliver food, on a bike, as a courier, as twenty old young men or woman. Plus the old one can fell down, while he is riding. Because his coordination not so good.
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, according to medical researchers, they have proved that after 50-60 years our brains start to decrease producing
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pecial substance that helps to brain job vastly and make decisions more efficiently. Which means after 50 years old our brains can't task as we were youngs.
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, our brains start to dry up, as a fact of lack of water in the body, which happens after metabolic changes ( lack of hormones, menopause etc).
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, it should be mentioned that 60 years old have more experience than young ones, which helps yo provide good knowledge of
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ubject that they teach or know. Overall, I think that after 60 years old working causes a problem.
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