Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are spending more and more time on social networking sites. While some people believe these sites are negative to users as well as

society

, I would not totally agree with

such

a view. On the one hand, social networking platform plays an important role in building bonds among people. Due

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the heavy workload, there is limited time for people to have face-to-face communication in

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modern

society

. It is the social media that fulfil the needs of keeping touch with friends and relatives.

For example

, students who study in a foreign country may contract with their parents as their wish thanks to

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apps like Messenger and WhatsApp. What’ more,

society

may

also

benefit

by

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the social networking sites in information exchange. The governors, who have to make decisions according to the latest news, can adjust and announce their actions thought the updated information by social media. It is not surprising that many

politics

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,

such

as Trump, spend

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ot of time on Twitter to share their minds with the public.

On the other hand

, social media may do some harm to the individual and

society

.

Firstly

, there is a risk to meet criminals on the internet, which may result in the loss of money.

For instance

, an increasing number of many people reporting the fraud of investments when they were surfing on

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social media.

Second

, the social networking system could spread

of

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the fake news rapidly, which may cause panic to the public.

For example

, the

rumor

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of toilet paper shortage leads to

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huge chaos in

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S where citizens fight in the supermarkets for goods.

Although

these negative impacts are noticeable, it could be avoided by introducing laws and regulations. In conclusion,

although

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social networking sites may have some harmful impact, it is

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enefit to the individual and

society

.