Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, people are spending more and more time on social networking sites. While some people believe these sites are negative to users as well as
society
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, I would not totally agree with
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a view. On the one hand, social networking platform plays an important role in building bonds among people. Due
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the heavy workload, there is limited time for people to have face-to-face communication in
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modern
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. It is the social media that fulfil the needs of keeping touch with friends and relatives.
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, students who study in a foreign country may contract with their parents as their wish thanks to
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apps like Messenger and WhatsApp. What’ more,
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the social networking sites in information exchange. The governors, who have to make decisions according to the latest news, can adjust and announce their actions thought the updated information by social media. It is not surprising that many
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,
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ot of time on Twitter to share their minds with the public.
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, social media may do some harm to the individual and
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, there is a risk to meet criminals on the internet, which may result in the loss of money.
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, an increasing number of many people reporting the fraud of investments when they were surfing on
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social media.
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, the social networking system could spread
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the fake news rapidly, which may cause panic to the public.
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, the
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of toilet paper shortage leads to
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huge chaos in
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S where citizens fight in the supermarkets for goods.
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these negative impacts are noticeable, it could be avoided by introducing laws and regulations. In conclusion,
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social networking sites may have some harmful impact, it is
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enefit to the individual and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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