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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

#people #range #technology #gap #effect
The line graph
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illustrates
 the proportion of students aged from 18 and 25 years old attending
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university in four Asian countries. Overall, the amount of student between 18-25 years old going to
universitites
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universities
 increased among all the countries from 1961 to 2011. By 1961, Thailand had the greatest number of 18-25 years old students attending
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universities at 25%.
Although
 by 1991
this
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 decreased to 20%, in the following years, it rose dramatically reaching over 40%.
Similarly
, the proportion of students in
this
 range of age increased in
Singapure
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Singapore
. From 1961 and 2011
this
figure
 fluctuated significantly and changed from 15% to 40% of students going to
universitites
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universities
 who were age 18-25. In 1961, Malaysia had almost 0 students going to university within
this
 age, in 2011,
this
figure
 increased significantly and 15% of the students aged 18-25 were going to universities. In
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hilippines, the percentage of students in their 18s and 25s going to university increased
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about 13%
from
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 1961 and 1991.
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after
this
 year,
this
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 remained stable.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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