Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The given bar charts illustrate information about the

further

steps of the UK’s graduate and postgraduate students who did not prefer full-time job after graduating from the university in 2008. Overall, it can be seen that the majority of both graduate and postgraduate students gave their preference to

the

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further

study

, whereas those who preferred voluntary

work

made up an insignificant part compared with other categories. According to the data of the graduate students, it can be noticed that approximately 30.000 students continued their

study

.

However

, just over the half graduates who continued their

further

study

preferred unemployment, whilst part-time workers were 1500 more than those who preferred not to

work

.

Furthermore

, voluntary workers made up a tiny proportion

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3500 students which

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4.5 times lesser than non-workers. Turning to the postgraduates, it can be noticed that figures of postgraduates who preferred

further

education and part-time

work

were near each other,

however

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those who continued

study

exceeded part-time workers 2725, 2535 respectively.

Although

the figures of those who chose not to

work

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1625, while volunteers were too little 345.