Some groups of people have benefited from modern communication technology but some people have not benefited at all. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no room for doubts that modern
communication
technologies have been changed our Correct your spelling
lives
life
lifes
. Correct your spelling
lives
However
, this
rapid advancement has not impacted positively to all population segments in the same extent. I agree that benefits from those technologies are only for for
a group of people. Benefits from those technologies are still services for Remove the redundancy
apply
well educated
people with easy Add a hyphen
well-educated
access
to it.
Most of the users of modern communication
technologies are well educated
people. They are involved with Add a hyphen
well-educated
electronical
devices in early age and they get used to Correct your spelling
electronic
leverage
it for many purposes Change the verb form
leveraging
such
as design, communication
to name a few because they have special instructions and classes for those objectives. For instance
, high quality
schools destinate more than four hours a week to activities leveraged by electronic devices compared with Add a hyphen
high-quality
low quality
schools which utilize one hour or less per week to do things leveraged by some Add a hyphen
low-quality
communication
technologies. This
does not take into account electronic devices quality which suggests that well educated
students are more likely to receive benefits from Add a hyphen
well-educated
communication
technologies.
Despite technologies enable to us transact bytes almost everywhere in the world, communication
technologies uses are concentrated on urban and well developed
areas. Add a hyphen
well-developed
This
does not allow the benefits from communication
technologies such
as i
nternet, computer and phones reach to everyone in the world. Add an article
the
For example
, nowadays, millions of people in rural areas in non-developed countries cannot access
to the internet, they cannot access
to the biggest knowledge base created for the humankind in our history because those countries cannot afford spend resources in create
Change the verb form
creating
communication
infrastructure in remote areas. Thus
, millions of people cannot benefit from communication
technologies as people in urban and rich countries do.
In conclusion, I agree that benefits from those technologies are only for for
a group of people. Benefits from those technologies are received by Remove the redundancy
apply
well educated
people who can Add a hyphen
well-educated
access
easily to it.Submitted by roberto.espinozav on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite