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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The people's identity is helped by huge networking companies and unions. I am talking about the good and bad points of
this
 essay. And I will give my opinion below.
To begin
 with, the personal resources of a lot of people is not released by big online work office and organisations is an advantage. According to a survey conducted by New Genesis daily in march 2020, approximately 70% of the respondents who were expert of
information
 technology said that ability of individual
information
 is convenient and used to that.
This
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dvantage.
In addition
, It is an issue which the online companies and organisations hold personal
information
 of disadvantages is that it is dangerous because It used crime.
For example
, many people have forgotten their own
information
.
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