The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans below illustrate Grange

Park

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when it was

initially

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constructed and present day. As can be seen, there are three principal changes: on the west, middle, and east side of the

park

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. Whereas north-west rose garden and both gates from Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street remain unchanged. A closer look at major change, the performing stage, on the west side, was expanded and developed into a amphitheater for cencerts. In the center of Grange

Park

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, the fountain was replaced by new rose garden, surrounded by seats which originally located around the

park

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. To the east of the

park

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, rose garden and pond for water plants, north-east side were demolished and built into café and playground. To the south-east of the

park

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, glasshouse was knocked-down and replaced by water feature, and ,

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, it locate

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to the new entrace to underground parking lot.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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renovations
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landscaping
facilities
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preservation
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historical elements
conservation
recreational areas
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