Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people hold the view that students should pay for their own higher education fees.

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, others believe that students don't have enough time to make

money

and

otherwise

can obstruct their study progress. In my opinion, they should afford

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tudy rather than ask for help from governments. Doing some part-time jobs enable students to learn about

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alues of

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. The only way for them to pay for their tuition bills by themselves is to go out of the campus and find some jobs to earn

money

. During the process, they have more opportunities to deal with challenges and figure out solutions by themselves because there isn't anyone

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an help them, which is completely different from

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schools. When they work in KFC,

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, they have to resolve

conplaints

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complaints

from clients or conflicts with colleagues, which can improve their independent and problem-solving abilities a lot. Gradually, they usually can understand how difficult to make a living and cherish every

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and even labour. Integrating into society in advance can help them find the right direction of their career path. Compared with students who pay their tuitions by government, they can find their interests in advance by working or being

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nternship in various industries when

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money

. Some people think working while studying maybe

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students' study, most students can

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good use of their free time, like weekend or vacations.

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, some students don't know what's specific job orientation in the future, they can value the internship or part time-job to find out the real interest of their careers. To sum up, students should pay for their own tuitions because it not only contributes to their

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but

also

help them prepare for their career path earlier.