Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing videogames. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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changing is knocking everywhere .A group of people claim that

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children in outdoor activities

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more important than playing electronics games.I am supporting the

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view The most important thing is

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ealthy life.Outdoor sports are forced to children to do run or jump which increase the body stamina as well as

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very fruitful to

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merican research journal that the children who are played basketball or baseball which is outdoor games are more wealthy than others children.whenever a youngster increase their movement in outdoors task at that time they will meet different real character which is helpful to improve their brain

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enormous benefits to

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their carrier. Admittedly, There are some extreme side effect of videogames At

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its injurious for eyes .

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nowadays most of the video games are human killing or

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such

as pubg and call of duty

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researchers says that it increase the children crime rate.

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somedays ago newzeland a boy killed many

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in the mosque

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the killing style same as pubg.

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it is proved that

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video

games

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boosted up children decision-making ability. In conclusion, outdoor games are more effective than any games which

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played by computers or mobiles.Above mentioned the reasons

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supporting.