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Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for their children. Others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both view and give your opinion

#parents #childcare #centers #care #children #members #grandparents #job
Child
 upbringing is a very important job for
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hild,s physical as well as mental health it becomes more valuable if parents are working , the only option left for them to keep
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their
 children either in
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hild
care
 centre or with their grandparent .In both, the conditions
child
care
 can be done nicely but it depends on persons to person parents whether their parent healths condition is good or not ,in my opinion , I fully believe that
child
care
 unit can provide better
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 to their kids. We all know every coin has two faces same way in
child
 parenting, professional
care
 has its own advantages as well as disadvantages , but
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 think advantages are more as they
care
 others children more sophisticated way as that it is
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their
 job that they follow certain rules and regulation which been framed after many
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 to provide best of best
care
 to children, they have
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their
 well-trained staff for it and they have their specific work . where ar in grandparent
care
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there
their
 are many loophole points which
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 those
grand parents
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grandparents
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 caring is not as good as private paid caring .
first
 of all
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we have to find out , whether grandparent can take
care
 of your children's
care
 properly or not because many times oldage parents sufferings are more by which we can say that they are incapable to perform
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their
 job efficiently, in conclusion
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 must say if good parenting been given to kids from
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their
 infant age for
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their
 mental as well physical health ,it would be good and which will help them to achieve
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ood score of
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their
 milestone and parents can
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 work tension free.
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