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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, industrialized countries give financial
aid
 to poorer countries, though it is not enough to solve the issue like bankruptcy.
That is
 why
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 some people hold the belief that rich countries should give their preference to be beneficial with other types of help rather than give money. In my point of view
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both financial and non-financial aids should be balanced and all the necessities of poorer countries should be analyzed in order to understand the way of
aid
.
To begin
 with, it is obvious that financial
aid
 can solve various problems but cannot absolutely solve
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ebt.
First
 of all, financial
aid
 can be beneficial for the development of the industry and economics of each country that are essential factors of advancement of each nation. Having said that, if the country develops industry and economics it means that there will be added workplaces and
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evel of bankruptcy may be reduced.
Hence
, migration
level
 will be reduced,
however
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it is not a sufficient solution.
On the other hand
, there are many factors that will contribute to the development of poorer nations and reduce poverty.
Firstly
, there are essential categories
such
 as health and education that are of paramount significance for each nation.
Consequently
, industrialized countries can provide sources and equipment for the evolution of healthcare,
moreover
 encourage education and give opportunities and resources to poorer nations in order
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ncrease the
level
 of educated people.
Furthermore
, if people are educated and they are able to follow their health system the
level
 of poverty should definitely decrease. All in all, I partly agree with
this
 statement and I consider that financial
aid
 has its own significance.
Furthermore
, other factors as encouragement of education and giving opportunity to raise health system are more sufficient solving issue like poverty
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
  • infrastructure
  • education
  • fair trade
  • trade barriers
  • sustainable development
  • environmental conservation
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