You are planning a two-week vacation, and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • tell your neighbor that you are going away • ask your neighbor to take care of your house for you • explain what tasks you would like your neighbor to do

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Dear

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Smith, I am writing

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letter to inform you regarding my two-week vacation to Paris. My

Husband

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and I will be travelling to France on 11th October, which is

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Friday.

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, I would like to ask a small

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from you in regards to our apartment. Let me explain in detail, we recently have adopted a

cat

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, a Persian white

cat

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name Bebe, we need your assistance in feeding her once a day while we are away on a trip. She is

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friendly

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; I am sure you will be delighted to meet her as well.

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, as you would know we have a small home garden, which needs to be watered once in two days

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since you will be feeding our

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, hope you do not mind watering our plants too. I hope

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activities would be feasible for you and not cause you much burden. We hope to hear back from you soon. Best Regards, Rumi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

162 words

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