Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. What do you think this means? Do you agree with this statement?

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How beautiful is he or she

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statement means every people have

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view about

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beauty

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who is my most

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but a friend of mine likes another person. A reason why

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situations

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is every people have their own think and aspects.

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eally bad habit in social life because it will become a big

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. I have many experiences about it when I working, some co-workers usually want to arrange what they want. It is annoying and very stressful.

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, it is a big reason for those people

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annot keep

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good relaisionionship with their friends. Individuals always should respect other people's aspect.

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right way to make

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etter life for personal and

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, people

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beauti each other. It is

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natural

because human is

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nly animal has

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. It is impossible that they have

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and it is

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eally sad situation that everyone has

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ame personality.

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instinct. All people want to be good looking to other people so they always try to make up their face and body. It is

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ain reason that people are interested in fashion and make-up.

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, that industry is growing faster more and more. It can help developing economy, either. To sum up, every people has

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sight and I 100% agree with that.

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, people should respect

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aspects and opinion.

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right way to live as one of human in society.

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

291 words

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