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Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child’s education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.

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Physical Education is an important aspect of the school curriculum. It helps to build and develop one’s personality and way of living. Physical Education often helps children develop life skills which would
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 help them in future. Physical education is prime in a child’s life and must be given equal if not more
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 than academic subjects taught in schools. The reason being children who spend much
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 in physical activities tend to be more energetic and develop many more skills than others who are bound to their books alone. Indulging in physical activities
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 play a major role in avoiding chronic health issues in the future. There is a well establish notion these days that children must
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 more
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resent day, a deciding factor of someone’s career or future is the job they hold. Which in turn is decided by how well they did in their academics or the marks they scored in the more prominent subjects like Science and Mathematics. Spending more
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 and energy studying and increasing the knowledge bank would help the children to settle well in
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 competitive age. I believe physical education should be a mandate in the school syllabus and children must be given ample
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 to ensure their body is getting enough exercise. There are several learnings which can be attained from physical education exclusively which are not offered by academic subjects. To quote one of many
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 examples; for a life skill like swimming, just by having the theoretical knowledge of the techniques used for swimming would not suffice for an individual to actually go for a swim.
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