Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to secure a good job. Others believe that employers value work experience more than a university degree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every person in a certain period of his life starts to seek for a vacant position, hoping to find a great

job

.

However

, there are debates between those who believe that a higher education diploma provides better career opportunities and those who convinced that relevant experience is more important to get a well-paid

job

.

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essay will examine both views before providing a final opinion. It is

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ell-known fact that educational institutions usually provide students

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not only theoretical knowledge but

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essential social skills which are crucial for

work

in sales.

For example

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subjects as leadership, public talks and psychology are compulsory in

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achelor curriculum. Ability to

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in a team and good communication skills play

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ey role during employees’ selection in sales companies.

As a result

, candidates with higher education often have more chances to get

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desired

job

in comparison with experienced

job

-seekers.

Nonetheless

, not all jobs are like that. Each object of art often involves certain pairs of well-trained hands.

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is because

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work

with delicate raw materials

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special gentle technics.

Likewise

, every fashion house has dozens of professional needlewomen who create manually amazing decorative elements and these specialists honed their skills by decades of hard

work

.

This

is why famous designers trust their masterpieces only to experienced employees

instead

of educated one’s.

As a result

, to get

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access in

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areer path in the field of art have become almost impossible without relevant experience. In conclusion, it seems there are different occasions of getting

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reat

job

. While

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niversity degree is

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aramount requirement for some jobs,

work

experience may be more important for others.

Hence

, getting acquainted in advance with skills which are mandatory for the desired position will help one to make

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right choice.