Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, music, pictures or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays many people defend that creative artists may always be free to create their original content.
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ot of people with the flag that creative artists must have all the freedom to make their jobs,
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, a movie. Even if the artist approach polemic topics, they should have the authorization to create whatever content. A situation like
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happened with one channel from youtube called "Porta dos Fundos".
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channel made a video with Jesus Christ being homosexual on a Christmas night. Many religious
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disapprove that movie, demanding a
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request from the channel.
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a radical group put fire in one of the places of
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ompany because of
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injured. The lack of regulatory agencies can be quite terrible. In the case of any artist approach some polemic topic like racism or genocide,
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can affect a lot of people. These can be anger very quickly, causing a chain effect on the previous creators. It's extremely advised that creators think on their acts before
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any content. To conclude,
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it's quite nice that creative artists should not have any chains to do their jobs.
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because
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ublic. So it's hardly recommended that exist a regulatory agency or government that take care of which topics creative artists may approach and manage.
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