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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the average rate of citizen is 18-30 years old, making their
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 among young adults compare other countries.
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 works hard to improve the economy. They are more innovative and has
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rge to be successful. In India, for
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example, they have young people graduating
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college every year and joining the workforce to lift the countries economy.
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urge in demand for jobs for them.
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ounger generation demands more educational and health facilities, with average life expectancy rate is 80, governments
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 to invest more in these facilities to facilitate the needs of their citizens.
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, In America, Obama ran his Presidential campaign on making health services cheaper for all the Americans, which resonate with the general public and He won.
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 like Japan are high risk of an economic crash. In Japan, many citizens are choosing to remain single and not to procreate which results in death toll being higher than the birth toll for an example. In these countries, the change to accept new technologies is limited.
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, governments need to invest more in health services to provide better care for their ageing citizens. As discussed above, many Japanese chose to focus on their career over marriage, governments have to provide better old care HomeServices for these citizens. To conclude,
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 having a younger generation demands more facilities, but it
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 contribute to the countries economies and work towards the success of their nation.
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, its advantages precede the disadvantages.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic
  • workforce
  • productivity
  • innovation
  • skilled labor
  • social development
  • technology
  • dividend
  • competition
  • resources
  • social welfare
  • unrest
  • instability
  • healthcare
  • elderly care
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