Traffic congestion is a serious problem in most big cities. Some people believe that governments should build more roads. What do you think about the solution?

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traffic jam is a vital problem in developing countries. While authorities have faced

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that they have to plan more roads. From my point of view,

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solution, along with my opinion. To start with, Traffic congestion has been a growing problem with the growth of population in most cities around the

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most those big cities have a great infrastructure, they are struggling with the new people

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on roads, but it damages the environment by the carbon dioxide

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private cars every day, and

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, they spend more time on the road because of the traffic jams.

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the major issue.

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public transportation, and plan more trains' roads would be a reasonable suggestion to that.

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more roads might decrease the

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of time people spending on their way to their

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, nither it will reduce the

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