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Topic: Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#topic #computers #languages #waste #time #language
An overwhelming number of people consider that new computer technologies can help with
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ranslation in different languages more correctly and briefly and there is no need to learn new languages. I completely disagree with
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 statement due to the lack of vocabulary and lexical structures and the impossibility of speaking in the real world. One reason why I do not support
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 statement is that many
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 dictionaries cannot translate the whole sentences or texts correctly.
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, many people face the problem of translating to their native language with wrong lexical meaning because the
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 translators put the words where there are inadequate.
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, I tried to tackle the problem with Yandex.Translator where the system cannot provide me
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he specific words in the right meaning and just put the simple words in the text where it is not relevant. Another point to consider is that translating words and sentences while speaking with
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person
 can lead to negative emotions and the loss of communication.
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, while people trying to print the unknown words to speak with
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person
, they start to
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 the time of opponent and
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it becomes boring and
person
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 to end the conversation as soon as possible. The best example that
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 that issue is the translator did his job
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 the conference in translating the speaker. Unfortunately, he did not know the meaning of the word which he ought to translate and
as a result
, the translator becomes disappointed, tried to translate it in
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 while speaking with another
person
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Submitted by Nataliia Litovchenko on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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