In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Unparalleled development of technology has paved the way for digitalisation.

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electronic books are gaining ground among the population.

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trend and try to arrive at a rational conclusion. In

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modern era, many a person leads a feverish lifestyle. Digitalised books are

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lessing for

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people, who are in pursuit of reading.

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gadgets like smartphones could occupy a lot of books irrespective of

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digital size.

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, amazon kindle-an online reading platform

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offers millions of books for the readers, they could download it and use it at their convenient time.

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, comparing to any hard copies or printed media, electronic books are less expensive. On top of all these, digital books are not only affordable but convenient as well.

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e-reading has many merits, it's drawbacks should not be overlooked.

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and foremost, spending a prolonged time on the internet may invite some physical issues

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lethargy

, vision impairment and back pain.

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, infringement of online copyright is

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another concern of the e-reading. The autobiography of famous cricket player Sachin Tendulkar was leaked before it's formal publication.

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, any error in the online storage system could

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ntire book collection from the internet with a fraction of seconds. In short, even though online reading has some demerits

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creating some health problems,

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of books, comfort to carry, affordability and so on are

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advantages. Ergo, I strongly believe that

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ositives of e-reading

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its negatives.