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Traffic congestion is becoming increasingly problematic in major cities. What solutions can you suggest to help solve the problem?

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Many families have at least one vehicle to drive to and from the industry which results in heavy traffic in large cities.
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, there are solutions to resolve
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 issue. It seems to me that both state and individuals are responsible for
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. Most head offices are established in downtowns’ of large cities. As most people can not afford to leave in the city centre, they have to waste hours every day to get to their job. I believe that the ministry should monitor and encourage corporations to set up their offices outside the city limits or even change their location to smaller towns.
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 way road trips will be less time-consuming. Another solution that power can come up with is to cut down taxes for companies if they offer an option for employees to production from home. Nowadays, the most struggle is done behind the computers,
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 there is no need for workers to drive to their office if they can produce at home.
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, during the pandemic,most employees had to industry from home and most of the businesses were not affected by
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 will help to reduce transportation and eliminate unnecessary vehicles.
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 the government is responsible for the high amount of vehicles on the road, every citizen should be culpable as well. There is a huge variety of car-sharing applications available for every individual, but unfortunately, they are not popular yet. Many people should consider the option of sharing a car with somebody else to get to the destination. By
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, citizens can avoid traffic and use high occupancy lanes for vehicles with 2 or more passengers.
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, there can be fewer vehicles with the same number of people getting to work. There is definitely an issue with traffic in major cities.
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, it is in every country’s and citizens capability to resolve
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 problem.
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