Write a letter to invite an English-speaking friend to watch a movie with you about your country. In your letter: Include some background about the film Explain why it might interest him/her Suggest arrangements for watching the film

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Dear Mike, How are you doing? We didn’t go out for ages. That’s why I am writing to suggest you join me

Friday and go to watch a historical movie about Kazakhstan. The picture recreates events of my country at the times of the Mongol empire and is called “Mongol”. The most pleasing part of

this

film is the excellent cinematography. An operator made an outstanding job photographing

this

movie, making the bleakest of landscapes look stunning many times and adding some wonderful

closeup

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shots of objects and faces.

In addition

, the creators of the film have specially built a fort

to the Ilyi river for the shoot. I remember that you are keen on historical movies and ancient architecture. That’s why I am sure you will enjoy it. Watching the movie will be conducted

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17 to 19 p.m

Friday at Bekmambetov cinema. If you agree to come along with me, I will pick you up at 16.30 and we will be just in time at the cinema. I hope you will be able to join me. I am looking forward to your earliest answer. Take care, Maria

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to invite an English-speaking friend to watch a movie with you about your country. In your letter: Include some background about the film Explain why it might interest him/her Suggest arrangements for watching the film

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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