The global demand for oil and gas is increasing. Some believe that we should therefore encourage the exploitation of remote areas. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people believe that the exploitation of
oil
and gas from remote areas should be encouraged Use synonyms
due to
the high demand for it globally. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, it brings lots of benefits to developing Linking Words
countries
, Use synonyms
however
,there Linking Words
is
can be some disadvantages to Unnecessary verb
apply
there
decisions.
Replace the word
their
Oil
and gas have been one of the major Use synonyms
demand
from both developing Fix the agreement mistake
demands
countries
and developed Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the main merit of it, is that it can be a means of internal revenue in a settlement, which can serve as a source of income, in order to make payment for their yearly budget, and Linking Words
also
lead to inter-relationships between different Linking Words
countries
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, another positive value Linking Words
from
these exploits, is that Change preposition
of
it
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they
helps
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help
in creating
more Wrong verb form
create
employments
for youths in the job market. Fix the agreement mistake
employment
For instance
, the Bronx Linking Words
petroleum company
in Nigeria has really uplifted many unemployed young adults from the job market by increasing many infrastructures. Correct your spelling
Petroleum Company
This
has helped in improving the security of the country, especially the rural environment where it is located.
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On the other hand
, irrespective of these advantages, there are still drawbacks to Linking Words
this
. The main demerit of Linking Words
this
is that it can sometimes lead to insecurity in the villages or states. Linking Words
For example
, in the south-south area of Nigeria, where they have many Linking Words
oil
wells, the local youths sometimes revote Use synonyms
to
the government, whenever they do not receive monetary settlements from the federal government, hereby breaking the Change preposition
apply
oil
pipes and causing more harm, Use synonyms
such
as pollution, fire explosion, and rubbery. Linking Words
This
can Linking Words
also
lead to fights between the youths and those in power causing unnecessary loss of innocent lives.
In summary, Linking Words
although
the benefit of exploitation of petro is helpful to a lot of individuals, Linking Words
however
, the negative effect should be looked into, and Linking Words
also
be managed properly, in order to avoid any loss of innocent lives.Linking Words
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task response
Work on providing a clearer position on whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Make sure to present a well-structured argument for a balanced view on the topic.
coherence cohesion
The overall structure and flow of ideas is decent, but there is room for improvement in linking ideas more cohesively and organizing the content more logically.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...