A growing number of people work by telecommuting, that is, the employee work from home, using a computer and Internet to connect with the office. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working this way.

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A lot of companies are shifting to the work-from-home strategy where their employees work most of their working hours remotely with visiting the office when needed. In
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I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of
this
strategy. On one hand, working from home is a money and time saver.
Firstly
, a big percentage of what a person gets out of a job goes to clothes and cosmetic consumptions from purchasing new goods to the maintenance of them.
Secondly
, a person spends more time than his/her working hours around the job.
This
time is usually spent on transportation.
Therefore
, those are the main cons to working at the workspace.
On the other hand
, the environments of the offices are designed for their purposes.
Therefore
, it is easier to concentrate and dive
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the work by being there.
Moreover
, being around coworkers usually fasten the work base.
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, it is easier to ask for clarifications from a person sitting
next
to you than having to call them. It
also
maintains a social life between the workers which is necessary for each individual. To conclude, working remotely has both advantages and disadvantages equally.
However
, a well-designed schedule will help the employees to build a balance social life internally and externally as well as sustaining the same amount of productivity.
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