The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?
It is known that the proportion of pure people face residents of almost 10 large countries in the world. They have overpopulated cities where people are able to struggle with them rely on several simple steps which are likely decreasing and use their strength and knowledge to protect
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Being over polluted our planet faces a problem of shortage of pure Linking Words
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. The population has been increasing every year and Use synonyms
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supplies are used without stopping which causes their decrease. Use synonyms
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, the populations of China and India exceed the numberLinking Words
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stocks are inefficient for providing every citizen which leads to the health problems for people. Use synonyms
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pollution and unreasonable usage are demanded special attention and attitude. People build factories and plants which throw their waste into the Linking Words
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and it pollutes the earth`s supplies. Use synonyms
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, the population cannot deal with Linking Words
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properly and spend the great amount of it in vain forgetting sometimes to switch it off or take a shower spending less time. Use synonyms
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First
of all, if all the countries made exceptional cleaning systems to purify the Linking Words
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, it would make a significant effect on the whole ecological situation and the Use synonyms
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, Sweden has already created and reused in agriculture without just dropping it into the soil. Linking Words
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, being highly developed many countries should educate children about reasonable using of Linking Words
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resources starting with primary school. It would be definitely advantageous for the nations if people were more attentive to the environment so their grandchildren could live in an ecologically friendly environment.
Come to the conclusion, I want to say that it is only people`s duties and responsibilities to prevent Use synonyms
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