The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

It is known that the proportion of pure
water
is significantly being reduced. Due to
this
fact
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people face
the
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questions about the causes of the decreasing
water
amount and the ways of solving
this
problem. Being over polluted our planet faces a problem of shortage of pure
water
. The population has been increasing every year and
water
supplies are used without stopping which causes their decrease.
For example
, the populations of China and India exceed the number
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residents of almost 10 large countries in the world. They have overpopulated cities where
water
stocks are inefficient for providing every citizen which leads to the health problems for people.
Moreover
, not only overpopulation
,
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but
also
pollution and unreasonable usage are demanded special attention and attitude. People build factories and plants which throw their waste into the
water
and it pollutes the earth`s supplies.
Furthermore
, the population cannot deal with
water
properly and spend the great amount of it in vain forgetting sometimes to switch it off or take a shower spending less time.
This
always happens in developing countries where citizens
are just consume
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water
without thinking that it can be expired as they are used to live in
such
a way without thinking about future generations. Despite the problems
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people are able to struggle with them rely on several simple steps which are likely
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ettle the current situation.
First
of all, if all the countries made exceptional cleaning systems to purify the
water
, it would make a significant effect on the whole ecological situation and the
water
problem
in particular
.
For example
, Sweden has already created and reused in agriculture without just dropping it into the soil.
Secondly
, being highly developed many countries should educate children about reasonable using of
water
resources starting with primary school. It would be definitely advantageous for the nations if people were more attentive to the environment so their grandchildren could live in an ecologically friendly environment. Come to the conclusion, I want to say that it is only people`s duties and responsibilities to prevent
water
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decreasing and use their strength and knowledge to protect
water
supplies.
Submitted by Nataliia Litovchenko on

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