Animal testing has always been controversial issue. Some people believe that governments should ban these practices completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Testing on animals is a practice that has been conducted for many years for various reasons. Whether governments should ban these applications or not is a controversial issue.

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I am not in favour of

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testings, there are many reasons to be grateful for the results of

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practice. The benefits mankind achieved so far are analysed in

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essay.

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with, animals that are used for laboratory exams have feelings, pain and discomfort. Clearly, they are used for the experiments to understand how they react for a particular substance. Because of the similar biological structure of humans, scientists and doctors will assess and conclude whether to use them on mankind.

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, animal kind has to undergo terrible pain.

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, they are used for cosmetic products

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as shampoos and lotions, though they are not essential for living.

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way, we are suffering the other species for our pleasure.

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, it is undeniable that great discoveries have been made through animal testing. A few pandemic diseases

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as cholera and plague have been completely eradicated.

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, immunizations today are saviours of our lives. Thanks to medical research, which has made it possible for us to have medicine that can prevent the spread of

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serious illnesses. In most of

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countries, governments made these vaccines available to common people in public hospitals to be given from birth. Due to

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, many countries are leading peaceful lives. To conclude, animal testing is a controversial issue because it is immoral to make them suffer.

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, I have to advocate considering the benefits that are available for the health and safety of humankind.

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