The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Traffic becomes a major

problem

for the metropolitan cities, and

this

usually occurs when people travel not for work, shopping and education in their daily life. I partially agree with that less travel can reduce

this

issue up to some

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but it has some drawbacks too.

To begin

with, online shopping plays

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ital role to reduce

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ongestion

problem

. Nowadays people choose to shop online

instead

of going for

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offline shopping. Along with that there are numerous applications are available like share a car while someone is going for the particular route while travelling so that another person can join them resultant, only one car is fulfilling the need of two persons

thus

,

this

will help to decrease traffic rate.

On the other hand

, unemployment will become

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huge

problem

if people will stop going outside. Cab drivers like Ola and Uber can

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their job because

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there is a decline in travelling. Shop store persons cannot be able to survive and

fulfill

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their need and because customers prefer to do online shopping rather than coming

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their store. Another major

problem

will be if people stop going outside and they become more introvert because they are actually not

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interacting

with anybody face to face. To conclude with, Shop online and car sharing can reduce the traffic

problem

, but it will impact on the country economy and

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behaviour. I think we have to keep balance and work smartly, whenever needed someone can go outside

otherwise

, we should stop creating

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traffic congestion.