Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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eason for the huge traffic jam problems.
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overnment put different alternatives to reduce
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sage of cars. I
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with the statement that , rapid growth in
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like market place everywhere you look around on roads you will find cars, buses and motorbikes. More and more
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people
prefer to travel in their own
car
to go for office
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of going
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public
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minutes
to travel only 5
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kilometre
kilometres
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ituation is going worse
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are increasing at
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lying rate.
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in
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government
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articular
day
to avoid
these huge congestion
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on roads. In order to avoid big jams on roads centre should aware people to use public
transport
for office purpose .
Government
need to give special discount on public
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buses or trains so more and more people prefer to go
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overnment can increase the private insurance prices of cars which will encourage the people to go for buses.
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fair in morning bussy hour time and same in
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vening time for trains and all other public
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40% of
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traffic. In conclusion, rapid growth in cars becoming
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eadache for all if
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overnment should not take action on
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ajor concern . So
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overnment should start taking necessary action from now to save congestion on roads.
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