Write a letter to a teacher asking for a reference letter for a job and explain: – Why you have chosen him to write the reference letter – What kind of job you are applying for – Why you think you are suitable for this job

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Dear Sir, I am an ex-student of your university, and now writing to request you to provide me

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reference letter which is a requirement to submit with the application for a

post

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of job in a company. I am would like to get

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letter from you as I attended four courses of yours,

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as data analysis, database-fundamental, database-advance, and data-administration, during my graduation, and obtained good grades. Having vast knowledge of these subjects is required for the

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I am applying for;

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, I believe, if you recommend me for

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I will be properly judged. I am going to apply in British American

Tobaco

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Tobacco

for the

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of "Database consultant". The major responsibilities include creating

relational

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database and managing that. It is a permanent

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with handsome remuneration and fringe benefits. I decided to try for

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job as I think I am very much competent for

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because my educational background completely matches with

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, and I have

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extensive

work experience in

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field.

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, I must enjoy the tasks that I have to perform if I have been recruited for

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. In

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circumstances, I am requesting you to provide me

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letter of recommendation considering my

performace

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your courses and other characteristics. Yours faithfully, Taslima

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

213 words

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