Job satisfaction is more important than earning a high salary.

Job
Satisfaction
is more important than our salary. I partially agree with that idea. There are lots of advantages to
job
satisfaction
. At the same time, there are lots of disadvantages, too.
First
of all, Everyone can have as a
job
what they want to be. If they
don’t
like their
job
, we feel unhappy ourselves. Eventually, they start to be exhausted. Because who doesn’t do what they like, or if they
don’t
contribute anything in their career, even they earn high amounts of money, they
don’t
want to work at all.
On the other hand
, If anyone has
job
satisfaction
, they want to go to work happier and they would be more successful in their career. They can improve their project more efficiently. If they
Don’t
earn enough money, eventually they feel uncomfortable and embarrassed in our
life
. nowadays, unfortunately, Money is becoming the most important value in our
life
. Especially in Turkey, day by day, every item is getting more expensive. Even if we are not married,
life
is still expensive. If we marry and we had a child,
life
is getting harder,
Although
we have
job
satisfaction
, We couldn’t be happy when we
don’t
make ends meet. When they Don't buy what their children and their spouse want, They will be disappointed about
life
. It will lead to them feel the invaluable person. Overall, Earning Money is important as much as our
job
satisfaction
. In these situations, balance is really important. People never being happy without Money and
job
satisfaction
.
Nevertheless
, some people can be happy wither Money or
job
satisfaction
. It depends on people’s expectations.

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