Due to television and the internet it is easier today for a large number of people to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?
Modern technologies like TV and
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the
nternet
help many people to be known effortlessly; obviously, Correct your spelling
Internet
this
does not produce the best content. On the contrary
, easy fame attracts the worse
and clears the way for them to spread their ideas. Replace the word
worst
Firstly
, being famous becomes equivalent to being shocking. That is
due to the fact that a picture is always more attracting
than a written word. Replace the word
attractive
Thus
, some social media attention seekers are competing to do the most dangerous actions, like climbing a tower bared handed
or jumping over a cliff with no safety Add a hyphen
bared-handed
gears
. These efforts are mainly to draw more traffic to their web profiles. In return, a web page with high traffic generates more money through advertisements. Fix the agreement mistake
gear
As a result
, going to the extreme helps to boost the person's fame and wealth. Secondly
, because television and internet
are mostly not strictly regulated, governments have loose hands over its contents. Correct article usage
the internet
In other words
, criminals and perverts have a safe haven to get famous and to
create whatever trend they wish. A clear example Fix the infinitive
apply
for
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of
easy
the terrorist groups in Syria promoted their actions, and successfully recruited followers through the internet. Alternatively, previous terrorist groups in the eighties and the nineties were less famous because they lacked these modern tools; Change the word
easily
hence
, had fewer followers. Consequently
, criminals can easily influence the masses in a low supervised
medium. Add a hyphen
low-supervised
To sum up
, not all development is good development. Unfortunately, the easiness of becoming famous in today's world is creating multiple negative patterns; furthermore
, it is the
tool for Correct article usage
a
the
outlaws to reach their victims.Correct article usage
apply
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