Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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is full of different changes, but attitudes to them differ from person to person. While
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some tend towards leading a
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monotonous
lifestyle , I feel that alterations foster enthusiasm and fill the
life
with meaning. Generally, those who are against changes are people with conservative views, they feel comfortable with what they already have and
thus
hesitate to chase after new challenges.
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could be explained by the motto of their ancestors who believed that it is wiser to be
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grateful
for what you have,
instead
of pursuing "unattainable" targets. On account of
this
, some individuals' perception of change is negative. I,
however
, sincerely believe that a person ought to undergo various alterations in order to conceive their calling in
life
.
Instead
of being intimidated to be devoid of what they have accumulated so far, they could consider what they could have attained provided that they have embarked on new challenges. A prime example
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could be my grandfather. Back in the days
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he was fortunate to be offered a higher position in another part of the world. Despite
this
, he decided to turn the offer down, while his cousin accepted it and flew away. As a consequence, the former does nothing but tortures himself with thoughts how the
life
would have turned, had he signed the contract, whilst the latter savours the
life
and does not regret about anything. To conclude, even though changes are sometimes risky, it is better to try and fail rather than torment yourself because of the missed opportunity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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