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Some people believe that a county becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Intermingling
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 of
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a
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ide variety of nationalities and cultures enrich a nation from several aspects.The hybridization of norms and togetherness of various types of people hailing from multiple regions of
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orld not only create additional attraction towards them but
also
 add a pace to their development.
This
 essay will explain why multiple nationalities and cultures make a specific
country
 more efficient and lessen their monotony. Whenever it is a question of human resource,the more are mixed together the better is the result both in terms of infrastructural and intellectual excellence,be it a developed or developing
country
.
For example
,it is like a cocktail drink;when alone the drink is not so interesting but when different types of fruits are blended together,it
beomes
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becomes
 a tasty one.When people from various part of
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the
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orld stay together it brings the whole
world
 closer.
Furthermore
,the economic and religious views are
also
 shared that helps the globalization;spreading the commerce and values beyond the barrier. As we know it is an era of globalization,it naturally demands more and more togetherness to ensure the equitable balance between the resources throughout the
world
 for the overall well being of
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arth.
Moreover
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we find a
country
 more interesting when there are many people residing with
seperate
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separate
 traditions and values.
Finally
,the development
also
 plummets when everyone
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 together forgetting their roots.Overall a nation can draw more tourist attraction
also
 when it becomes more lucrative. Though there are
also
 views against the fact that the combination of many cultures and nationalities make a
country
 more attractive and improves development the positivity is obvious to me.
Therefore
,yes,I completely agree with the developmental growth and the thought of making a
country
 more interesting by mixing up several kinds of
popolation
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population
populations
.
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