APPLICATION LETTER TOPIC . You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Lannister, Please accept
this
letter as an expression of my interest in a part-time position as a Social Media Marketing manager.
Although
I am a recent university graduate, my analytical and creative skills and vast experience will make me an excellent candidate for
this
post. As it was noted earlier, I have recently finished my graduation in Marketing and Management from Dornwood University.
However
, my career started off quite a long
while
ago in a small cafe. That experience taught me how to successfully promote the social media accounts of cafes and restaurants.
Consequently
, during my 4 years with Basri-Baba and Efendi restaurants, I initiated extensive improvements that resulted in garnering more loyal clients and positive reviews of gourmets. As for availability, I am flexible and can work on Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday from 1 p.m. to 5 p.m. and any time remotely.
This
schedule allows me to balance my working hours with other restaurants where I have been
also
employed. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss my potential contributions to your restaurant. Yours
sencerely
Correct your spelling
sincerely
, Derek Wright.
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task achievement
Clarify the direct intention to apply at the beginning, making your main purpose crystal clear.
coherence cohesion
Integrate transitioning phrases between paragraphs to enhance flow.
presentation
Ensure consistency in formatting (heading, salutations) according to the letter’s formality.
closing statement
Review and diversify your concluding paragraph, 'I would appreciate the opportunity to meet...,' to make a stronger impression.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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