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Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people try to compare job fulfilment and a secured position at work to see which option is a better choice. As everything has its pros and cons, before forming any opinion, I will delve into both approaches to debate. For the people who have an unstable financial status, it is unrealistic for them to think about following their dream jobs
instead
 of having a full-time position. More precisely, if they choose a career which allows them to have a stable life, they will not have a fear of homeless or hunger.
As a result
, dream jobs which could not provide them with enough money to survive are bad options.
For instance
, we all love arts and music, but not all of us have enough courage to become an artist. Whether we want to admit it or not, for poor people, doing farm works to earn some money for food is much better than sitting on a chair to draw a picture. On the
next
 level of the Maslow hierarchy of need, after achieving a certain stable life standard, a permanent job with a decent salary does not fulfil a normal human anymore. Naturally, people in
this
 situation want to follow a career that makes them feel happy. Doing what people are passionate about making them feel alive, and it gives them a meaningful life because they love every single thing they do. Taking my mother as an example, she studied food engineering when her family was poor.
However
, after 30 years, she resigned in the department of agriculture to teach for a private school in the city to fulfil so she could lead the young generations. In conclusion,
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assion and having a full-time occupation are all excellent choices for everyone as long as it fits that person’s situation. From my perspective, we all choose a job to earn money from the beginning and follow the career we love when we are stable.
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