Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has long been a heated debate about whether receiving a call on
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obile phone in public should be forbidden or not. In my own’s perspective, it is impractical that we cannot use our legal property, to be more specific, as mobile phones even in the public or crowded place and
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issue. On the one side, it is completely illegal and unfair if implemented a rule counter the act of receiving a call on mobile phones in public. The fact that
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commit the property rights or even constitution in various countries.
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, it is widely unacceptable that using the owned properties without harmful or illegal like handset, in public, have to be restricted or banned.
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ruly full agreement of many citizens, regardless of classes in society. On the flip side, many people comment that makes or receive a call in public is completely disturbing and annoying others if the listeners or callers raised their voice too loud,
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ariety of different kinds of noises, do not need to be the voice of people when talking on portable phones.
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ublic for only a while, they are not likely to care about the strangers or neighbourhood too much to put themselves under pressure. To recapitulate, based on the freedom, legal permission and unrelated or harmful to surrounding people, the fact that talking on mobile phones in crowded places is an unavoidable situation and unintentional action.
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, I hold the view that it is not worth to totally be banned
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speaking to other listeners or speakers via handphone in the public area.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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