Some believe that charitable organizations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has long been a heated debate about whether charitable clubs should
support
people wherever they live or only give a hand to people, who live in the location where the charity is established. In my own perspective, charitable institutions are able to aid poor living condition people despite distance or time and
this
paper is going to discuss both aspects. On the one hand, in terms of patriotism, the act of supporting poor local civilian is intensely enhancing local attachment. With regard to reputation, the prestigious and credibility of non-profit groups will be gained from where they live as far as
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extend their name to the neighbourhood are concerned.
For instance
, those donation events or collected and distributing of
second
-hand clothes to people who in poverty or lack of living standards, do not only release scared and satisfy powerful emotion in every touching hearts
,
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but
also
pay the concern to the community where
organization
are accommodating.
On the other hand
, there
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some comment maintain that non-profit organizations should responsible all over the world,
however
,
this
thought is partially true to some extent. With young
organization
or association, they are often not enough capacity and capability to handle the bigger concern or project,
for example
, supporting and carrier foods, medicines to the armed conflict or war zones, are
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pecial and professional duty of United Nation, Red Cross
Organization
, neither common non-profit organizations nor volunteer groups.
Furthermore
, if other associations or even individuals want to donate or
support
, they
may
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their supplies and products via
organization
or association which preparing and campaigning to go into harsh living condition areas. To sum up, despite the fact that not all
organization
are able to
support
people in different areas immediately and directly,
nevertheless
, it can be done easily if the organizations, associations cooperate together to
support
and share the value of material or products aid.
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