More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

Migrating to other countries is a phenomenon that can be rooted
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the very ancient period of human civilisation. People
move
to other countries and places for
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etter
life
, a better environment and better settlement. The number of qualified and skilled people migrating to developed countries from comparatively poor countries is increasing rapidly and some people think that it is a natural human tendency to settle in a better environment rather than to stay in their
home
country
.
On the contrary
other groups of people find it hard to accept that it is a natural trend and criticise the rich nations for the brain drain. I believe that rich countries to some extent allure talented individuals to settle there but mostly it is decided by individuals and it is a natural movement by talented people.
To begin
with, the
life
standard, security, career growth, political environment, research facilities and many other aspects of a better
life
in rich countries are far better than the poor nations.
That is
why capable individuals who might contribute to a great extent for a
country
are often allured by the rich nations to
move
and work there. The brain drain system that mainly attracts talented professionals to settle in rich nations could not be denied. According to
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recent statistics, more than 10
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talented individuals from Asian countries are permanently living and working in countries like the USA, the UK, Australia, Canada and Sweden. Rich nations have many large and
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organisations that hunt for the talented people who are in IT, engineering, medicine or in other similar professions from poor nations and encourage them to contribute for their countries. Because of
this
talent hunt or more specifically brain drain system many poor nations are suffering from the scarcity of talented professionals. These individuals were supported and financed by the poor countries and when the time has come to repay and show patriotism, they are working for the development of rich nations. From
this
regards, some people accept that the rich countries are actually stealing capable professionals from poor nations. But it can be easily understood that no rich
nation
can force a talented individual to migrate there and that’s why it is a decision taken by a person. Skilled professionals and workers are migrating to rich nations to have a better
life
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etter salary. They can easily compare the
life
and career prospect their
home
country
would offer with the opportunity they will get if they
move
to a rich
nation
. Should not poor nations provide better facilities for those gifted and skilled people to work at
home
country
and ensure
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etter lifestyle? The political instability, insecurity, discrimination in
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orkplace are three major reasons people
move
to a rich
nation
. Again, rich nations are not only giving the opportunity to talented individuals,
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they are
also
allowing students,
labours
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refuses, minors and family members of workers. So from
this
regards, we can’t blame them that they are stealing talents from poor nations. Moving to a better
place
has always been a natural trend throughout the very beginning of human existence. People always moved from one
place
to another to get a better
place
to live in. Moving to a better
place
is a tendency we have inherited from our forefathers. Many skilled professionals through work in rich nations do not forget their
home
countries in most cases. They are the primary revenue earners for poor nations and from
this
regards, they are contributing towards the development of a poor
country
. It is often seen that a middle-aged skilled professional often come back to his
home
country
and contribute even more from the experience he has gathered through working in a rich
nation
. In conclusion, migrating to rich nations is a natural trend for expert professionals, which are mostly their own choices for better and secured
life
rather than the rich nations’ advertised temptation for them.
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