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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less. You should write at least 250 words.

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The
consumption
 of sugar-based beverages is increasing. It is a serious problem because it negatively impacts on people’s
health
.
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ain reasons of popularity of these drinks with the solutions to make people drink less of it. Perhaps one of the main reasons
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rowing
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nergy that they give. These beverages are mainly popular among teenagers. Because a lot of them are sleep deprived, and they want to feel energized all day long. It keeps them awake because of the caffeine, sugar and other additives. Those drinks are highly advertised as well. Another key factor is neglect to personal diet and
health
. People do not realize the possible
health
 dangers,
such
 as heart attacks, high blood pressure, obesity and insomnia that may be caused by sugar-based drinks. They are extremely harmful and unhealthy. People drink it because of the taste, which is clearly only based on chemicals. Fortunately, there are some solutions to
this
 problem.
First
 of all, the schools should educate teens, and children in general, about the consequences of uncontrollable
consumption
 of sugar-based drinks, because they are the ones, who are mainly affected by it.
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governments or
health
 care organizations should control the production and promotion of these drinks. If all the
health
 risks would be written on the cans and bottles of those drinks, and false advertising would be eliminated,
then
 people would drink less of these beverages. In conclusion, the rising number of sugar-based drinks
consumption
 is an issue, mainly caused by unhealthy eating habits and lack of energy. I recommend that the schools educate students on
this
 topic and governments control the creating and advertising of sugar-based drinks.
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