Increasing price of the petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures that you think might be effective ?

It is sometimes argued that

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the

cost

of fossil fuel is the most effective solution for environmental and problems on the roads these days. While I agree that

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method is extremely successful in decreasing the

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of exhaust fumes that were emitted and the number of traffic congestion, I believe that there are other possible measures that have

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imilar result. There are various reasons why

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the price of

energy

resource is considered to be a superior measure.

To begin

with,

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excessive exhaust fumes is the main factor that contributes to

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pollution and environment degradation.

Therefore

, escalating the price of renewable

energy

could directly

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citizens from purchasing and using private transportations regularly.

Consequently

, not only the

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of personal vehicles but

also

the amount of carbon dioxide will experience a decline,

hence

alleviate the pollution issue.

Furthermore

, the higher

energy

cost

, the

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residents driving their means of transport since the travelling

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by cars is

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more than buses or trains,

thus

reduce traffic problems.

For example

,

instead

of spending 30 dollars

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fuels, people are likely to pay 6 dollars

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to travel by public transport

such

as train in order to save money. Despite the above arguments, I believe that there are other solutions that share

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similar effect.

Firstly

, the administration should introduce

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legislation that

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the ticket

cost

to entice citizens into public transports. In fact,

this

method when coped with the rise of

energy

could hinder the individuals from using personal vehicles effectively, results in the pollutant and traffic issues depletion.

Secondly

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overnment can invest in researching an alternative renewable

energy

resource that could benefit the environment.

For instance

, hydropower, water or wind

energy

are expected to have

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similar productivity and emit less carbon dioxide compared to gasoline. As a consequence, the threat of fuels consumption as well as pollution can be alleviated. In conclusion, while increasing the unrenewable

energy

cost

is advantageous for certain reasons, I do not believe that it is the only method that could benefit the environment and decrease

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road congestions.