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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Work and study at the same time are a common practice among some students. Because of that routine, the pressure rises on the undergraduate and some have no time to dedicate at school or university. In
this
 essay, I will explain what I consider to be the main reason and suggest two ways to alleviate the stress and don't let the job interfere in the study. In a world where every day the search for a job is more competitive, you must have a differential, something to caught the attention of the companies. It can be achieved with a good school or university.
However
 a good education institution will not be cheap, actually, the price will be as much as well known
this
 institution is. In results, many students have to work while studying to pay the fees. Other reasons may be the students just want some work experience. Even though working will give you a good knowledge about your future, students must prioritize the school. So I believe that should be created a rule to limit the number of hours that the students can work and it can be related to how good their grades are.
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  • Financial necessity
  • Tuition
  • Living costs
  • Employability
  • Work experience
  • Under pressure
  • Mismanagement
  • Time-management
  • Academic pursuits
  • Flexible part-time study
  • Financial aid
  • Scholarships
  • Bursaries
  • Collaboration
  • Integrated programs
  • Education
  • Work-life balance
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