Some people believe that children are given too much free time . They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time.

Needless to say,

education

is very important for all

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young children in

this

modern day. A number of individuals say that children ought to spend their free

time

on

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studying. Others think studying and rest have to

be

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balance

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. In

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essay, I will attempt to outline both ideas and provide my perspective below. To commence with, there have several

reason

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for why many

of

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parents wish their son or daughter spending more

time

on studying.

Firstly

, children can absorb a lot of extra new knowledge and improve their school's exam result.

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arents would pay a private tutor to

teaching

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their children at home after school or attending

to

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tutoring class in order to help them to obtain a wonderful exam result.

Moreover

, concentrating on studying can apply to

studying

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in

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celebrity colleges or universities, which have a high quality of

education

system, high reputation and full-scale facilities.

Also

for your future career,

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will promote your personal value .

However

, the opposite group hold with a different kind of view.

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people support that children should have leisure

time

after school. The most significant factor is

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can reduce their pressure during studying. Studying all day will affect children's mental health problem, so giving an

encogh

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enough

inch

leisure

time

is very important.

Furthermore

,

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parent can use

this

period of

time

to build up family-ship, they can be enjoyable to playing together or having fun in their life

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To sum up, in my opinion, while

education

is one of the significant

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for our offspring. But enough feel

time

is

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is

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indispensable in our life.

Thus

, I would say that

education

and feel

time

have to

be

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balance

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.