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Some people think that people should be given right to use fresh water as they like. Others believe governments should control toughly over the use of fresh water. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Fresh
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water
 is one of the most valuable natural resources, as it sustains human life. Unfortunately, there is a problem of
water
 shortage, but
this
 is not new, but a portion people today assert that it is necessary to ensure the
use
 of
this
 resource is under the strict control of the government. Due to the higher demand of
water
 for industrial manufacture, daily life, and
further
 preventing the destruction of dependent hydro-ecosystems,
fresh
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water
 which is theoretically deemed as the renewable, will, if consumption at present rates continues, run out one day. What is worse, the abusive
use
 of
water
 is common to see on in the farmland, in factories and the household.
Therefore
, supposing that
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overnment takes no actions to deter a
water
 crisis, what would happen in the future? Would human beings be able to
use
water
 as they like? In order to combat the deteriorating situation, it is believed the authority is supposed to regulate the maximum quantity of consumption in industrial production and adopt high-technology aimed at recycling used
water
 on farmland.
On the other hand
, it is fair to say people do have the right to
use
fresh
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water
 as they want. The main reason lies in that any restrictions might lead to poor sanitary conditions and the spread of diseases.
In addition
, it lowers people’s living standards and causes a lot of
inconvenience
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.
For instance
, showers are only available in at certain hours of a day; flowers can only be watered once a week. In summary, from my perspective,
although
 the budget for advancing
water
-saving technique aggravates
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overnment’s financial burden, it is their obligation to tackle the issue. Apart from the measures to control the consumption of
fresh
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water
 large-scale educational campaigns should be held to
in-still
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instil
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 the awareness of the public need in saving
water
 in public.
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