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The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting the total energy from 1971 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graphs illustrate the data about the consume of renewable
energy
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ccounting of
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otal source of
energy
 from 1971 to 2006. As can be witnessed that the highest amount of
energy
 was consumed by Finland, while the United Kingdom is the nation, consumed
energy
 at least.
Moreover
, the consuming
energy
 trend in whole countries has an upward tendency. The
first
 thing should note is that Finland has reached 25 per
cent
 in
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nitial year, 1971 and fluctuated widely during the whole period of time. Whereas, the following years, it experienced fluctuation and reached
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at
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s
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imilar
point
 in 1976 and 1983 around 22 per
cent
. Denmark witnessed a similar drip/drop to the bottom, under ten per
cent
 in 1986 after that reached
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 peak in 1991 to 15 per
cent
. The line graph of
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nited State is identical with Denmark in the period of 1976 to 1991, they are increased gradually,
then
, reached to
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imilar
point
 with
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nited States in late 2006. Another thing to
point
 out is, regardless of was not started at the same
point
, France begins at 10 and Germany at five per
cent
 graphics, both of them have witnessed an up and down quite parallelly before,
in contrast
 in late 2001.
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