Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Metropolitan cities are getting over-crowded these days.
As a result
, the number of modes of conveyance
are
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increasing rapidly. On
one
hand, some people support the thought of prohibiting vehicles in downtowns while others can't even give a thought to
this
idea. I partially agree with
this
idea and will elaborate
further
on both sides. Restriction of private cars will gradually boost the use of public transport. Apparently, leading to less traffic and reduced fuel consumption.
Moreover
, individuals will
also
prefer walking and cycling to the closest supermarkets and shops.
For instance
, 20 people travelling
in
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a bus,
instead
of their 20 different modes of transport is the simplest solution for congestion in city
centers
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. Arranging parking spaces will not be a problem anymore.
Infact
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In fact
, these areas can be used for residential and business setup purposes. On the flip side,
this
can
also
end up in many problems in daily life. In case of emergencies like any health issue,
one
will definitely feel the lack of a private car. Even being in
c
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ity centre
one
can't rely on public transport 24*7.
Moreover
,
one
will eventually end up getting late for an interview or a
meetingbeacuse
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meeting because
of
the
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shared transportation. To encapsulate,
b
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anning of cars will somehow solve the problem of congestion
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but will end up causing inconvenience in daily routine.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • congestion
  • privately owned vehicles
  • ban
  • city centers
  • traffic congestion
  • air pollution
  • noise levels
  • urban environment
  • public transport
  • environmentally friendly
  • healthier lifestyle
  • commuting
  • congestion charges
  • peak times
  • environment-friendly vehicles
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